2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）03
建议信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，你班的交换生Tom在中国已经学习三个月，但是他依然觉得学习中文很困难、经常失眠且不知道如何交新朋友。请你给他写封邮件，给出一些建议。内容包括：
1.向同学或老师请教学习方法；
2.睡前听点音乐；
3.主动和别人交流并提供帮助。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems getting used to the life in China. I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.
First of all，you can turn to your classmates or teachers for help，who can offer some tips on Chinese learning. As for your sleep problem，you'd better listen to some relaxing music，which can help you to fall asleep quickly. What's more, it's important for you to actively talk to others and help others if necessary. In this way，you are likely to make more friends.
I hope my advice can be helpful and that you can enjoy your life here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，李华的班里有一个名叫Tom的交换生，他在中国已经学习三个月，但是依然觉得学习中文很困难、经常失眠且不知道如何交新朋友。要求考生以李华的身份给Tom写一封
信，就学习、生活和交友方面等给出一些建议。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
写作内容：给出建议
要点：
1.向同学或老师请教学习方法；
2.睡前听点音乐；
3.主动和别人交流并提供帮助。
第二步:列提纲
sorry to hear; have problem doing sth.; get used to the life in China; offer some suggestions; turn to sb. for help; offer some tips on sth.; listen to relaxing music; fall asleep
quickly; talk actively to others; make more friends; enjoy your life
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm sorry to hear that you have problems getting used to the life in China.
2. I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.
3. You can turn to your classmates or teachers for help.
4. You'd better listen to some relaxing music.
5. It's important for you to actively talk to others and help others if necessary.
6. I hope my advice can be helpful and that you can enjoy your life here.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序（供参考）：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end
2.表并列补充关系：As for …, What’s more,
3.表因果关系：In this way
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】
[高分句型1] First of all，you can turn to your classmates or teachers for help，who can offer some tips on Chinese learning.（who引导非限制性定语）
[高分句型2] As for your sleep problem，you'd better listen to some relaxing music，which can help you to fall asleep quickly.（which引导非限制性定语）
[高分句型3] I hope my advice can be helpful and that you can enjoy your life here.（并列宾语从句）
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成--篇完整的短文。
When I was in elementary school, I loved parties. I also liked all different kinds of people. I never quite fit into one of the many little groups at school, so I made friends from various groups. There was an “in” crowd made up of the cool kids who had the power to rule the school-if a cool kid wore two different colored socks to school one day, everyone thought it was great. But if an uncool kid did the same thing, the other kids would laugh at him or her.
Shannon was one of my friends who was the uncool type. She was a nice girl and wore pretty clothes, but was a little overweight. I don’t know why, but people found it acceptable to make fun of her. Whenever there was a strange noise or smell in the classroom the kids would laugh and point at her. Shannon never said anything.
One year, to celebrate my birthday, my mom told me I could have a party at home. I struggled for days deciding on which girls to invite. Once I had chosen all the names, I made the invitations and handed them out to my friends at school.
“Why did you invite Shannon?” asked a cool friend. She said that I had made a big mistake and pressured me to tell her not to come. I wasn’t sure what to do; I liked Shannon, yet I was afraid that the cool girls would be angry at me. I knew the right thing to do, but I eventually decided not to say anything to Shannon and let the invitations stay as written.
On the day of my party, both Shannon and my other friends came, and all that happened was that we had much fun together. None of the things I had worried about came to be. More parties and events followed that one and the memory of it gradually faded (模糊). In fact, it was many years later before I thought about that party again.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1
Twenty years later, I weas at my high school trwenty-year reunion (重逢,聚会) when a beautiful, slim, very professional-looking woman walked up to me.
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Paragraph 2
Then she told me something that stayed with me.
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【答案】
Twenty years later, I was at my high school twenty-year reunion when a beautiful, slim, very professional-looking woman walked up to me. She said, \"Lindy, I am so glad you came tonight. You're the reason why I am here.\" \"Oh?\" I replied, not recognizing her face at first. She pointed her nametag that read, \"Dr. Shannon Chatzky.\" We hugged and laughed . It was a long time since we had last seen each other. She was now a wife, a mother and a doctor!
Then she told me something that stayed with me. She told me elementary school was awful for her. She struggled all the time with thoughts of ending school. \"I came tonight to
thank you for being my friend. You made my days much better and I will never forget that you invited me to your party.\" hannon said it was important to her that I had welcomed her into the party, and it was a day when she felt accepted and part of a group. For me, it was just a party that I hadn't even remembered. But for Shannon, it was a party she would never forget. And now, neither will I.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在上初中时顶着朋友的压力，在自己的生日晚会上邀请了不受大家欢迎的Shannon的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“二十年后，我在高中二十年的聚会上，这时候一个美丽的，苗条的，看起来非常职业的女人走到我面前。”可知，第一段重点应该写这位美丽，纤细，职业女性是谁，以及她的语言动作。
由第二段首句内容“然后她告诉我一些留在我身边的事情。”可知，第二段重点描述Shannon回忆上初中时的遭遇以及作者邀请她参加生日晚会带给她的积极改变。
2.续写线索：聚会遇到Shannon——回忆过去——感谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.走向某人：walked up to me/ go up to me/come to me
②.挣扎：struggle/fight/battle
③.结束：end/finish/complete
情绪类
①.感谢：thank/showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
②.糟糕：awful/bad/trouble
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
It was a long time since we had last seen each other. （since引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2].
Shannon said it was important to her that I had welcomed her into the party, and it was a day when she felt accepted and part of a group（it 形式主语，that 引导主语从句；以及when引导的定语从句来修饰a day。）
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Almost everyone has read about the Taj Mahal in India. It is one of the most beautiful buildings in the world. Over three hundred years ago, Shah Jehan built the Taj Mahal as the tomb for his wife. Shah Jehan wanted his wife's tomb to be perfect. He did not care about time or money. He brought together workmen from all Asia. Altogether, over 20,000 men worked on the building, and it took them over seventeen years to finish it.
The building rests on a platform of red sandstone. Four thin white towers rise from the corners of the platform. A large dome rests from the centre of the building. Around this large dome there are four smaller ones.
The building is made of fine white and coloured marble. It has eight sides and many arches. There is an open corridor just inside the outer walls. From this corridor, the visitor looks through the marble screen to a central room. The bodies of Shah Jehan and his wife lie in a tomb below this room.
A beautiful garden surrounds the Taj Mahal. The green trees make the marble look even whiter. In front of the main entrance to the building there is a long, narrow pool. If you look in this pool, you can see all the beauty of the Taj Mahal in the reflection from the water.
Many people think the Taj Mahal is the most beautiful at sunset. Then the marble picks up the colour of the sunset, and the building and its reflection in the pool gleam like red jewels.
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The passage describes the famous Taj Mahal in India. The first paragraph explains why the Taj Mahal was built and how much time and labour were spent on it. (要点1) The second paragraph describes the location and appearance of the Taj Mahal. (要点2) The third paragraph details the building materials and the architecture style of the Taj Mahal. (要点3) The last two sections picture the environment around the Taj Mahal. (要点4)
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。这篇文章介绍了印度著名的泰姬陵，包括建造泰姬陵的原因、在它上面花费了多少时间和劳力、泰姬陵的位置和外观、它的建筑材料和建筑风格以及它周围的环境。
【详解】
1 要点摘录
①Almost everyone has read about the Taj Mahal in India. It is one of the most beautiful buildings in the world. Over three hundred years ago, Shah Jehan built the Taj Mahal as the tomb for his wife. Altogether, over 20,000 men worked on the building, and it took them over
seventeen years to finish it.
②The building rests on a platform of red sandstone. Around this large dome there are four smaller ones.
③The building is made of fine white and coloured marble. It has eight sides and many arches. There is an open corridor just inside the outer walls.
④A beautiful garden surrounds the Taj Mahal. Many people think the Taj Mahal is the most beautiful at sunset.
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点进行重组（作为总说），将第2、3、4两个要点进行整合（作为分说）。
3.遣词造句
The passage describes the famous Taj Mahal in India. The first paragraph explains why the Taj Mahal was built and how much time and labour were spent on it.
The second paragraph describes the location and appearance of the Taj Mahal.
The last two sections picture the environment around the Taj Mahal.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The passage describes the famous Taj Mahal in India. The first paragraph explains why the Taj Mahal was built and how much time and labour were spent on it.运用一个主从复合句对第一段进行了概括，其中运用why引导宾语从句的高级表达。
[高分句型2]The third paragraph details the building materials and the architecture style of the Taj Mahal. 运用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构对第三段进行概括，其中运用高级表达detail表示“详细介绍”。
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