告知信+读后续写+概要写作
1．假定你是李华，受疫情（pandemic）影响，学校美术俱乐部的活动不能在原教室进行，改为上一节网课。请写信通知你的英国同学Peter。内容包括： 1.上课时间：7月21日上午9:00-10:00； 2.登录软件：DingTalk App； 3.内容：卡通画； 4.课前准备。
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Peter,
How are you these days? I am writing to tell you something about our art class.
Because of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom as usual. Instead, we will have an online class by DingTalk App. The class will begin at 9:00 am on July 21st . It will last about one hour, during which we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures.
To make good preparations for the online class, you are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone
in advance and log on at least five minutes before the class.
Hope everything goes well!
Yours, LiHua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。 【详解】 第一步：
审题：信件 通知你的英国同学Peter上网课 人称：第二、三人称
时态：一般现在时、一般将来时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明写信目的，第二部分说明网课具体安排， 第三部分祝愿一切安好。 要点：
1. 说明写信目的：告知美术俱乐部上课事项 2．说明网课具体安排
①上课时间：7月21日上午9:00-10:00 ②登录软件：DingTalk App ③内容：绘画卡通画
④课前准备：提前下载DingTalk App，上课前5分钟必须登陆 3．祝愿一切安好
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
tell sb. about; organize activities; as usual; have an online class; last ; cartoon figures; make preparations for ;be required to do…; in advance ; log on 第三步：连词成句
(1)I am writing to tell you something about our art class.
(2) Because of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom. (3) We will have an online class by DingTalk App. (4)The class will begin at 9:00 am on July 21st .
(5) It will last about one hour.
(6) During this period, we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures. (7) You have to make good preparations for the online class.
(8) You are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance, (9) You log on at least five minutes before the class.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。 第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇) 用多种句式表达“由于/因为……”
(2)Because of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom. →Due to the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom. →As a result of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.
→ The pandemic has broken out. As a result, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom. 将第二个句子改写成定语从句，连接下面两个句子 (5) It will last about one hour.
(6) During this period, we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures.
→It will last about one hour, during which we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures. 将第一个句子作目的状语，连接下面两个句子
(7) You have to make good preparations for the online class.
(8) You are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance,
→To make good preparations for the online class, you are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance.
→In order to make good preparations for the online class, you are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。 【点睛】
范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 tell sb. about ; organize activities ; as usual; have an online class; make preparations for;be required to do…; in advance; log on 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如because of引导的原因状语的运用Because of the pandemic, we can’t organize any
activities in our former classroom as usual；非限制性定语从句的运用It will last about one hour, during which we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures；被动语态的运用，使句式多变you are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance等。
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Michelle one day found herself the unexpected owner of fifteen dollars. It seemed to her a very large amount of money. For a day or two she walked around in a dreamy state as she thought about her choices. Her daughter Mary was wearing worn shoes and needed new ones. She would buy cloth for new shirts for the boys. Her daughter Jane should have another dress. And still there would be enough left for new stockings for her children. The idea about how to spend the dollars made her restless with excitement.
On the day she planned to go shopping with the money, she ate a light meal--- no! Between getting the children fed and the house cleaned, and preparing herself to go shopping, she forgot to eat at all!
When she arrived at the large department store, she spotted a pile of silk stockings at the entrance. A sign nearby announced that they had been reduced in price. A young girl behind the counter asked her if she wished to examine the silky leg coverings. She smiled as if she had been asked to inspect diamond jewelry, and started to feel the soft, expensive items. Michelle picked up a black pair and looked at them closely. Two red marks suddenly showed on her pale face. She looked up at the shop girl and said proudly, “Well, I will buy this pair.”
Michelle changed her cotton stockings for the new silk ones in the ladies’ rest area. She had let herself be controlled by some machine-like force that directed her actions and freed her of responsibility. How good was the touch of the silk on her skin! Then she put her shoes back on and put her old stockings into her bag. Next, she went to the shoe department, where she tried on a pair of new boots. Her foot and ankle looked lovely. She could not believe that they were a part of herself.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右。 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1：
After buying a pair of new boots, she walked into the clothing department.
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She was about to leave the store when a kid running around reminded her of something.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Paragraph 1:
After buying a pair of new boots, she walked into the clothing department. Coming to a dressing mirror, looking at herself in the mirror, “Won’t I look more beautiful if my shoe matches a perfect dress on my body?” thought Michelle. She waved to the salesgirl of the department and asked her whether she could try on the fashionable dress styles. Her request was approved, Michelle kept trying on. One dress after another tried on, she put them into her shopping cart fondly. Paragraph 2:
She was about to leave the store when a kid running around reminded her of something. “Oh, My God! I forgot all about my kids!” yelled Michelle, starting to blame herself. “Excuse me, salesgirl, would you be so kind as to let me put back all I had chosen, for I had intended to buy my daughter Mary a new pair of shoes, boy’s new shirts and all of them new stockings? I must have lost my head!” A sense of responsibility of caring about her kids drove her to think of the right idea where the money should go. 【分析】
本文是一篇读后续写。 【详解】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要讲的是Michelle太太意外得到15美元，非常高兴。想着给女儿和儿子们买鞋子和衬衫，结果在百货公司试穿衣服时逐渐忘记了自己要给孩子们买东西。最后退还了购物车里所有的衣服的故事。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：买了一双新靴子后，她走进了服装部。这一段的关键词是“the clothing department(服装部)”。说明Michelle后来去了服装部。第一段应当围绕她在服装部所发生的事情展开。第二段开头是：她正要离开商店，这时一个孩子跑来跑去让她想起了一件事。这一段应该围绕的“kid”展开。Michelle想到了要给孩子买东西后，退掉了购物车她所选的东西。她知道她要把钱花在哪里。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。 【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式：宾语从句：She waved to the salesgirl of the department and asked her whether she could try on the fashionable dress styles；时间状语从句：She was about to leave the store when a kid running around reminded her of something 等。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
3．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
The term “helicopter（直升机） parents” is a description of parents who are hovering(盘旋) over their children in a state of extreme concern. They always show up to solve their children’s problems, protect them from real or imagined harm, resolve stressful situations, offer advice and get them out of trouble, even if they behave wrongly. Although out of love and concern, it can have harmful effects on their children’s emotional development and future independence.
Children learn through their mistakes. But if you intervene(干涉，介入) at first sign of struggle and finish your child’s homework, he’ll miss out on valuable learning opportunities.
You’re sending him the message that he needs to be perfect and failure is not an option; otherwise you wouldn’t always take over from him.
By constantly rescuing your child from stressful situations, you’re sending him a message that you don’t believe
he’s able to take care of himself. Children develop self-esteem(自尊) by learning how to complete challenges on their own. If you are always intervening, he will miss this vital stage in his growth. As a result, your child may lack the confidence necessary to do well in school, pursuing hobbies and interests, and developing friendships.
If you’re always taking care of everything for your child, it’ll be more difficult for him to become independent. As an adult, he might find it hard to take care of himself, because he has never developed coping skills to deal with life’s challenges. He might suffer from irrational(不理智的) fears, anxiety and depression, which could lead him to drop out of college or frequently change jobs, according to Dr Michele Borba. Instead of developing healthy relationships, he might seek a partner who will take care of or control him, as his parents did.
You can help your child become more independent by allowing him to complete tasks and challenges on his own without your intervention. Even if he fails at first, don’t interfere(干涉，干预) — encourage him to start again. Show that you have faith in his abilities to succeed without your help. Allow him to learn natural consequences（后果）. Even small things can help him become more independent— making his own bed, preparing his own lunch, shopping for his own clothes and doing homework without your help.
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\"Helicopter parents\parents getting deeply involved in children's life, actually do big harm to children's growth .Under over-protection, children miss the lessons taught by failures and mistakes,fail to build up their self-confidence and become weak in competence and emotions, which consequently makes it hard for them to face real life challenges.Therefore, parents should learn to let go and encourage children to be independent, staring from small things. 【分析】
本篇书面表达是概述写作。 【详解】
读完所给文章后用不多于60个词总结文章要点，要用自己的语言，不能用文章的原句。这是一篇说明文，文章说明了家长教育孩子的一种方式----直升机式父母，并提出这种教育方式的害处，劝说家长不要做直升机式父母。
（1）确定体裁，本文是说明文。明确主题（\"Helicopter parents\"）及结构。
（2）划主题句，找关键信息。这篇概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点。本文各段主题句是：
1. Although out of love and concern, it can have harmful effects on their children’s emotional development and future independence.
2. Children learn through their mistakes. But if you intervene(干涉，介入) at first sign of struggle and finish your child’s homework, he’ll miss out on valuable learning opportunities.
3. You’re sending him the message that he needs to be perfect and failure is not an option; otherwise you wouldn’t always take over from him.
4. By constantly rescuing your child from stressful situations, you’re sending him a message that you don’t believe he’s able to take care of himself.
5. If you’re always taking care of everything for your child, it’ll be more difficult for him to become independent.
6. You can help your child become more independent by allowing him to complete tasks and challenges on his own without your intervention.
(3)改写。注意要点之间的衍接，要用适当的关联词语要通全文。
(4)计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。
从范文中可以看出作者对原文要点的理解正确并呈现完整；应用语法结构和词汇准确；上下文连贯；要点表达独立；完全使用了自己的语言，语法结构准确，词汇应用丰富；所写内容与所提供内容密切相关，无文章原句。
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